Friday, January 26, 2007

Analyzing Titles- Shay Hemp and Melissa Mooney

Manufacturing Job loss: This title is not very interesting to us because its not creative, it is very straight forward. We think that it engages adults more because they are much more effected by job loss. We think the body of the paper is going to be about job loss.
The quiet war for freedom and thought: This titile is interesting because it is mysterious and makes you want to read about what the war might be. We think it is going to be about the struggles people face for freedom and thought.
Working women and societies view of them: This title does not really engage us, however it makes us want to read it becasue we are women. We think it will engage women because they are interested in what society thinks about them. We think this paper is going to be about the working class woman and how she is viewed in society.
Earth: used and abused: This titel is engaging because it ryhmes and we care about the earth. It will engage environmentalists and others who are concerned about the earth. This paper will be about the problems of the earth and how to fix it.
A story of success: This title is engaging because you want to know about this story. This title will engage people who like to read inspirational stories. We think this paper will be about a success story.
Youth of America: This is engaging to us becasue we are the youth of America and we are interested to see what it is about. This title will attract youths' attention and pehaps adults that want to know about how youth acts. We think this paper will be about how youths act.
I'm 18. Give me a drink!: This title is interesting because you cannot drink when you are 18 in the U.S. but it may be from another country or another time. This title will engage people who are 18. This article will be about an 18 yera old who is ready to be an adult.
The Dilemma of Tort Reform: This title is engaging because we do not know what tort refornmm is and we want to know what its about. This title would engage people who are interested in learning about tort reform. This paper is probably going to be about tort reform.
Same-sex Marriage: This title does not engage us beacsue it is boring. It will attract the attention of people who are intrigued with same sex marriage. The paper will be about same sex marriage.
Don't hurt Fluffy: This title is interesting because you want to know why Fluffy is being hurt. This paper will probably be about an abused cat.
Textbooks: the other college expense: This title is engaging because we spend money on text books and we want to know what the paper is going to say about it. This title will attract people who are going to college and spending a lot of money on textbooks. It will probably be about statistics of how much people spend on textbooks for college.

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